Sunday, April 29, 2007

Facing Reality

George ran to the front of the ship sitting in the co-pilot's seat.

"It's taking us to an uncharted planet!" He yelled.

I held my grip tight on the wheel as I began sweating.

The heat kept on coming as we got closer and closer to the atmosphere.

Right as we slammed at a landing platform I Hit the Floor.

We walked outside looking around the dust.

"Look." I said running.

There was a light blue colored building. I sensed that Jinx was there.

"Oh my God. Come on!" George said grabbing my hand rushing to the front of the building.

We made it inside safely. What a surprise. Seriously!

I saw her.

"Jinx!" I shouted happily throwing my arms around her.

I door opened slowly causing me to jump.

"Crap! It's Neddal." She said.

George grabbed me.

"Tash! We have to get out of here." He said.

I pulled away.

"No! I'm getting Jinx out of this place." I growled.

An over sized man ran inside.

"INTRUDERS!" He yelled spitting at George and me's feet.

We pulled out our lightsabers glaring at the man. I was guessing he was Neddal.

Neddal pulled out a gun.

George thrashed his green saber at him.

"Here!" I said tossing Jinx's lightsaber to her.

I pounced forward to face Neddal.

* * *

Many moments passed. Force was I tired.

"Get out of here jerk!" Neddal yelled.

He pushed me back.

I began balling my eyes out.

"NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS! SHE NEEDS ME! SHE COULD DIE! I CAN'T LOSE HER! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!" I stuttered.

"I've had it." Neddal whispered.

He pushed me into the thin glass wall breaking it.

I whited out.

To be continued...

3 comments:

Meredith25 said...

damn I thought my day was crazy

Jinx Miakoda said...

*blank stare*

Jay72 said...

o.O